隨著國際文化交流之間的越來越密切,出國留學的小伙伴越來越多了,而雅思就是出國留學的必要條件之一。雅思G類寫作分為大作文和小作文,小作文需要大家根據(jù)題目中的問題或者事件寫一封私人信件,形式可為非正式、半正式或正式。題目包括對一個問題或事件的描述,以及對考生需完成的任務的三點要求。文章字數(shù)不能少于150字,建議大家用20分鐘完成。小編最近整理了雅思g類小作文的范文,今天就把這些內(nèi)容分享給大家哦,希望大家可以參考和借鑒好的文章的寫作構(gòu)思。
一、雅思g類小作文范文15篇匯總
1.抱怨產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You havebought a washing machine. First you found that the machine damaged your clothes,and you had it changed. Then you found that the new one seriously entangled theclothes. Write to the manager of the department store to complain about it.2You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
A few months ago Ipurchased a washing machine (Sanyo XQB50-68) from your department store. After afew weeks I found that it had seriously damaged the clothes. I asked you tochange one for me, which you did. Now I want to ask you to change this one forme again.
This one does not damage my clothes any more, but I have found thatit tangles the clothes seriously and when it automatically begins to spin thewater out, the machine shakes so heavily that it stops by itself. In theinstruction booklet you have not mentioned this defect and neither have you toldthe user how to solve the problem. I am quite annoyed by the fact that sometimeswhen I came back from work to take the clothes out to dry, they were stillunwashed. When I at home. I have to tend it frequently to untwist the entangledclothes. Is that what you call your machine “fully automatic”?/Please change anew one for me that will not entangle the clothes. Otherwise, I would ask you togive my money back, or I would complain to the Consumers' Association.
Yours sincerely,
FanYang
2. 抱怨服務質(zhì)量
You should spend about 20 minutes on thistask. You went shopping one day and you had received very bad service in a shop.You want to complain to the boss. Write a letter to complain about the badservice. You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Much ofmy regret, I write this to place a complaint against one of your shop-assistantsabout his bad service. Yesterday morning about 10 o'clock my husband, I and alady friend of ours came to your shop with the intention to buy some souvenirs.One of the shop-assistants, whose badge number was 29 if I remembered right, wasasked to show us some of the bronze wares so that we could decide which one tobuy. Under the circumstances, it was the shop-assistant's duty to do what wasasked or to explain why he was unable to comply with such a request. Instead ofminding his duty and acting in a polite manner, he turned a deaf ear to ourrequest and walked away murmuring in a sarcastic manner.We wish you wouldlook into this unsatisfactory state of affairs and take steps to prevent arecurrence of offensive conduct of this kind.
Yours sincerely,
FanYang
3.咨詢信
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You areorganizing a trip to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales for a group ofstudents from Perth in Western Australia. Write to the manager of Student HostelServices and explain when you want to visit the Snowy Mountains, how long youwill stay, how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you willrequire.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir /Madam,
I am writing to seek accommodation in the Snowy Mountains for agroup of students from Perth.
We expect to be the Snowy Mountains betweenJune 1 and June 12. There are fourteen people in our group, five men and sevenwomen, and a married couple. The five men will accept dormitory accommodation,and the women are happy to share rooms, but the married couple would like adouble room. We hope to keep our expenses as low as possible.
Please tellme about recreational services in the area. The group will bring their own bootsfor bushwalking, but we are hoping to hire equipment for other sports, likeskiing. Some of our group will want to hire geological picks and otherequipment, if possible. We also need to know about access to caves and otherinteresting geological features in the area.
I am looking forward toreceiving information about the Student Hostel Services and otherfacilities.
Yours sincerely,
FanYang
4.說明信
should spend about 20 minutes on thistask.
You are studying at a university in England. Your passport was stolentwo days ago. Write to your embassy in London, giving details of what happenedand asking what you should do next
Dear Sir/Madam,
iam writing to repotthe loss of my passport and to request a new one. I lost my passport two daysago at about 8:30 in the evening when I bought three dictionaries at MBCbookstore. By accident, I left my passport at the shop. When I realized what Ihad done, I telephoned the shop, but the shop assistants there could not findit.
I would be grateful if you could tell me what documents I need to sendyou in order to be issued with a new passport. Do you require any passportphotographs, and if so how many? How much will a new passport cost and in whichcurrency would you like me to pay?
I must apologize for any inconveniencecaused and look forward to hearing from you. I'm looking forward to yourreply.
Yours sincerely,
FanYang
二、雅思G類寫作各分段評分標準
雅思G類寫作5分評分標準:
完成任務情況:基本上回應題目要求;格式可能有時不準確; 學術類:機械描述細節(jié),缺少清晰概括;可能缺少數(shù)據(jù)支持; 培訓類:提出寫信目的,有時不清晰;語氣可能多變,有時不得體; 呈現(xiàn)核心信息,但涵蓋不完整;可能有過于注重細節(jié)的傾向; 信息有一定組織但缺少總體延續(xù)性;
連貫與銜接:銜接手段不充分,不準確,或過度使用; 缺少指代和替換,顯得重復過多;
詞匯資源:使用有限詞匯量,但只是在最低層面上滿足題目;
語法結(jié)構(gòu)的范圍和準確性:拼寫和構(gòu)詞法上可能出現(xiàn)明顯錯誤,造成讀者的某些閱讀困難; 只能使用基本句子結(jié)構(gòu);試圖使用復雜句,但復雜句的使用準確性不如簡單句; 語法錯誤較多,標點有誤用;錯誤造成讀者的某些閱讀困難。
雅思G類寫作6分評分標準:
完成任務情況:根據(jù)寫作任務要求作文; 學術類:進行了概括,信息選擇合理; 普通培訓類:寫信目的基本清晰,語氣可能有不夠一貫之處;呈現(xiàn)并說明核心信息,但細節(jié)可能不夠相關,不適合或不準確
連貫與銜接:信息和觀點組織連貫;文章有延續(xù)性;銜接手段使用有效,但是句子內(nèi)部和句子之間的銜接可能有誤或過于機械; 指代關系可能不能總是清晰、合理地使用
詞匯資源:使用適當范圍的詞匯;試圖使用較不常見詞匯,但有一些不準確;
語法結(jié)構(gòu)的范圍和準確性: 在拼寫和構(gòu)詞法上有錯誤,但這些錯誤不至于影響交際;能使用簡單和復雜句子結(jié)構(gòu);語法和標點出現(xiàn)一些錯誤,盡管這些錯誤很少導致交流障礙。
雅思G類寫作7分評分標準:
完成任務情況:涵蓋題目要求; 學術類:清晰概括主要趨勢,差別或階段; 普通培訓類:清晰表達寫作目的,語氣一貫、得體; 清晰呈現(xiàn)并說明核心信息,但可以進行更加充分的擴展
連貫與銜接:信息和觀點組織有邏輯性;文章從頭至尾有延續(xù)性; 銜接手段使用合理,雖然可能有一些使用過少或過多
詞匯資源:詞匯使用豐富、有一定的準確性和靈活性; 能使用較不常見詞匯,對語體和搭配有所了解;
語法結(jié)構(gòu)的范圍和準確性:在詞匯的選擇、拼寫和構(gòu)詞法上偶爾有錯誤 使用多種復雜結(jié)構(gòu); 多數(shù)語句無誤;語法和標點掌握較好,但可能會犯一些錯誤。
雅思G類寫作8分評分標準:
完成任務情況:充分涵蓋題目的所有要求;
連貫與銜接:清晰而又得體地呈現(xiàn)并說明核心信息 信息和觀點的安排有序而富邏輯性; 銜接性的各個方面安排得體; 分段充分、適當
詞匯資源:能流暢、靈活地使用多樣詞匯來準確表達思想;能巧妙使用較不常見單詞和習語,盡管偶爾有詞匯選擇和搭配上的不準確; 拼寫和構(gòu)詞法錯誤極少。
雅思G類寫作9分評分標準:
完成任務情況:完全滿足任務的所有要求;
連貫與銜接:對于題目的回應清晰而完整;不露痕跡地使用銜接手段;分段得體;
詞匯資源:詞匯使用廣泛、自然而老到;極少出現(xiàn)小錯誤如“筆誤” 語法結(jié)構(gòu)的范圍和準確性:
語法結(jié)構(gòu)的使用廣泛、準確而靈活;極少出現(xiàn)小錯誤如“筆誤”。
三、雅思A、G類大作文寫作區(qū)別
雅思考試有A類和G類之分,在寫作方面,眾所周知的是雅思A類寫作為圖表小作文,雅思G類為書信小作文。其實,很多人不知道,雅思A、G兩類考試的寫作大作文部分,也有一些微小差異。下面詳細列出這些微小的差別:
1.題目難易程度
如同雅思G類閱讀難度低于A類閱讀難度一樣,雅思G類的寫作大作文部分難度較A類也有所降低,作文題目清晰易懂、容易理解。對比如下:
G類大作文: Some students travel abroad for one year before starting university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?
A類大作文: Some people think that space exploration is a waste of money and the funds should be relocated to other more needed areas. To what extent do you agree?
A類寫作在命題方面通常會有更深一步的討論。
2.主題難易程度
雅思G類寫作主題文章的主題更常見于生活類,如家庭、社會、學校、工作等。而在雅思A類寫作中,話題內(nèi)容相當廣泛,在涵蓋G類寫作的基礎上,更涵蓋了宇宙、科技、教育、經(jīng)濟、醫(yī)療、旅游、政府、城市、犯罪等等,如此寬泛的命題范圍使A類大作文更具挑戰(zhàn)性。
3.范文互通使用
雖然雅思G類寫作在難度上低于A類,特別是主題范圍上G類范圍較窄,但并不是說雅思G類寫作就不會出現(xiàn)其他類型的寫作話題,只是說概率較A類更低一些,更偏重“家長里短”話題類型。所以,對于雅思A類和G類考生來講,雅思寫作大作文是可以可互通使用的。對于開源雅思網(wǎng)站,雖然細分了A&G大作文、G類大作文真題、A類大作文真題,僅僅是真題方面的區(qū)分,在準備復習階段,雅思A類和雅思G類兩類考生均可互通使用,做到有針對性的學習。
4.評分標準
雅思G類與雅思A類寫作大作文部分評分標準相同,標準只有一個。
四、怎么提升雅思口語
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