推選答案1、個(gè)人陳述寫作技巧

(1)結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單，銜接緊密

新西蘭留學(xué)文書其實(shí)是你個(gè)人的廣告!要重點(diǎn)突出，形象鮮明。仔細(xì)想想，留下深刻印象的廣告哪個(gè)不是簡(jiǎn)明而富有創(chuàng)意的?許多申請(qǐng)人往往想把自己的全部?jī)?yōu)點(diǎn)都寫出來(lái)告訴教授，覺(jué)得這樣才能全面的展現(xiàn)自己。但是：“Simple
is the best”，試想一下，招生教授天天都要做大量的教學(xué)工作，還要抽出時(shí)間閱讀數(shù)量可觀的留學(xué)申請(qǐng)資料，只有那種簡(jiǎn)單有力的文章才能HIT THE
TARGET，讓人印象深刻!我們的理念是簡(jiǎn)明而富有創(chuàng)意的。

(2)突出重點(diǎn)，主線明確

清楚有力地表達(dá)你的求學(xué)動(dòng)機(jī)，和學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)術(shù)能力。在國(guó)內(nèi)有一種錯(cuò)誤的觀點(diǎn)，PS要“煽情”才能有效果。有的留學(xué)申請(qǐng)人就通過(guò)描述不相干活動(dòng)展示“獨(dú)特”的性格，或是學(xué)術(shù)上感覺(jué)沒(méi)有什么可寫的，就寫自己考試時(shí)克服了重重困難，如何考取了好成績(jī)!這是根本不著邊際的寫法，會(huì)讓錄取者發(fā)掘不到你的特點(diǎn)。要知道，PS是要在很短的時(shí)間內(nèi)，清楚地用幾百字告訴招生教授你是入學(xué)(獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金)非常合格的人選，盲目“煽情”完全不需要。


(3)符合西方思維習(xí)慣

文化的差異導(dǎo)致東西方在什么是美德和優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)的看法上不盡相同。在以往的經(jīng)歷中發(fā)現(xiàn)，有些留學(xué)申請(qǐng)人表達(dá)出來(lái)的“優(yōu)點(diǎn)”實(shí)際上在西方看來(lái)是缺點(diǎn)，反映申請(qǐng)人對(duì)學(xué)術(shù)問(wèn)題毫無(wú)主見;而有些申請(qǐng)人認(rèn)為不好的東西恰恰是西方人所欣賞的，認(rèn)為這些能表現(xiàn)出申請(qǐng)人布滿個(gè)性。所以申請(qǐng)人要了解如何以西方的思維方式取舍你的申請(qǐng)素材，把有益的亮點(diǎn)有選擇性地挑選出來(lái)，在適當(dāng)?shù)仄镎故境鰜?lái)。

2、個(gè)人陳述寫作范文

商科專業(yè)申請(qǐng)個(gè)人陳述范文及說(shuō)明：

As a child I often accompanied my father to his small coin shop and spent
hours watching him work. When I was older, I sometimes set up displays, waited
on customers, and even balanced the books. This experience instilled in me the
desire to own and manage my own business someday, yet I understand that the
business world today is more complex. This complexity requires more education,

and with that in mind, I am applying to the Master’s of Business Administration
program at Indiana University Bloomington (IUB).

通過(guò)一個(gè)故事開頭，講述自己為何對(duì)business感興趣。

In addition to my helping out in my father’s business, I have had numerous
other work experiences that further enhance my qualifications for this program.
My resume enumerates the various positions I have held at Kerasotes Theaters,
Chili’s restaurants, and Indiana University’s new Student Recreational Sports
Center (SRSC), and what all of these positions have in common is an emphasis on
serving the public effectively. Further, as an assistant manager at the
Showplace 11 and a staff coordinator at the SRSC, I have gained valuable
expertise in managing employees and creating work schedules. Both of these
positions have allowed me to develop my sales and people skills, which are
extremely important in an increasingly service-driven marketplace.


講述自己的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷，但是感覺(jué)在談及經(jīng)歷時(shí)候不夠具體，應(yīng)該說(shuō)明具體做了什么事情，從中得到什么經(jīng)驗(yàn)或者教訓(xùn)。

Not all of my work experience has been as a paid employee. Part of my
volunteering experience at Middleway House, the local battered women’s shelter,
involved extensive work on computers, including word processing, organizing
databases and creating spreadsheets. Also, I recently participated in an
internship program for academic credit with the Eli Lilly corporation in the
personnel division. As a management intern, I was able to watch the workings of
a major corporation up close and would like the opportunity to combine my
experiences with the theoretical background available in the MBA program at IUB,
with its emphasis on computers, marketing and human resources.

志愿者活動(dòng)同樣值得在ps中講述。

My successful internship is one element of my overall academic success as
an undergraduate here at IUB, yet I have also made time for a variety of
extracurricular activities, including working for my sorority and competing in
intramural basketball. My positive experiences here have resulted in my desire
to stay in Bloomington to continue my academic endeavors; furthermore,
continuing my education here would allow me to make important business contacts,
with the career goal of opening my own computer consulting firm in the
Midwest.