Below are sample sentences that show good reasons and bad reasonsin response to the question about why you want to attend theparticular college.

以下是關(guān)于回答為何來(lái)此學(xué)校的好與壞理由的范例

Sample Good Reasons
好的理由如下

I have read all of Professor John Green's works on the role of the color orange in curing psychological disorders and want to study psychology with him.

我讀過(guò)John Green教授有關(guān)橙色在治療精神病方面的特殊功效的論文，所以想在他的指導(dǎo)下學(xué)習(xí)心理學(xué)。

I have worked with Professor Susan Gray in Computer Engineering and would like the opportunity to continue this research with her while I pursue my undergraduate courses in your outstanding department.

我曾經(jīng)和計(jì)算機(jī)工程系的Susan Gray教授學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)，所以希望有機(jī)會(huì)近一步在大學(xué)期間在她的指導(dǎo)下做研究。

I want to pursue studies in Nordic Mythology and Vacuum Engineering， and your college is the only school in the Midwest that offers that combined major.

我想讀有關(guān)北歐神話和真空工程的雙學(xué)士，而在中西部只有你們學(xué)校提供這樣一個(gè)獨(dú)特的雙學(xué)位機(jī)會(huì)。

The university's unique philosophy on grading is identical to my own educational philosophy and, having studied Russian in school, I knew I would have enormous academic success as a Russian Literature major.

貴校獨(dú)特的評(píng)分理念和我個(gè)人的教育理念完全相符。并且，我在中學(xué)學(xué)了俄語(yǔ)，而我相信在大學(xué)里我會(huì)成為一個(gè)優(yōu)秀的俄語(yǔ)文學(xué)專(zhuān)業(yè)的學(xué)生。

I want to participate in the Baltic International Trade Co-Op Program that only your college others.

我想學(xué)習(xí)只有貴校才有的關(guān)于波羅的海國(guó)際商務(wù)合作項(xiàng)目的課程。

I spent a summer taking intensive college courses on Veterinary Medicine at your college and realized that studying to be a vet there, along with courses in Biology at your island research facility, for four years would represent a dream come true.

我在貴校學(xué)習(xí)了一夏天獸醫(yī)學(xué)的大學(xué)強(qiáng)化課程，這使我感覺(jué)到在貴校繼續(xù)此方面的學(xué)習(xí)，外加在你們校園的島嶼研究室學(xué)習(xí)生物學(xué)課程將使我作為獸醫(yī)的夢(mèng)想成真。

I am very impressed with your college’s hands-on approach to teaching Physics and want the opportunity to study String Theory with Professor Steven Marks.

我非常欣賞貴校在物理教學(xué)方面強(qiáng)調(diào)動(dòng)手實(shí)踐的方法，并且希望能夠有機(jī)會(huì)和Steven Marks教授學(xué)習(xí)弦論。

I prefer your college's encouragement of student-faculty collaboration on food-business ventures, proximity to the city’s business center, and the array of management internships offered with major food-related companies.

我喜歡貴校在食品科學(xué)商業(yè)領(lǐng)域?qū)熒献鞯墓膭?lì)，校園臨近城市商業(yè)中心的地理位置以及大量在大型食品公司做管理實(shí)習(xí)生的機(jī)會(huì)。

I know that the opportunities will be far greater for me to pursue leadership at a women's college, and your college offers more opportunities in Archaeology and Anthropology, the two fields that interest me most.

我感覺(jué)在一所女校我更有機(jī)會(huì)發(fā)揮領(lǐng)導(dǎo)才能，并且貴校在考古及人類(lèi)學(xué)這兩個(gè)我最感興趣的領(lǐng)域提供給了學(xué)生更多的機(jī)會(huì)。

I am impressed with the oceanfront-research facilities that will allow me to pursue work in Ocean Engineering, and at the same time you offer enough Music Theory classes to help me further my talent for composition.

我非常喜歡貴校在海邊的研究設(shè)施，我相信這能使我更好地學(xué)習(xí)海洋工程學(xué)；與此同時(shí)，貴校還提供了許多很好的樂(lè)理課程使我能發(fā)展我在作曲方面的才能。

I want to study cutting-edge Astronomy at a school with an observatory in a location where I can actually see the sky at night. But at the same time, I want a college that is affiliated with a conservatory that gives celesta lessons.

我想在一所有著能在夜晚清晰觀測(cè)夜空的天文臺(tái)的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)最先進(jìn)的天文學(xué)知識(shí)。同時(shí)，我也希望這所學(xué)校與一所教授鐘琴課程的音樂(lè)學(xué)院相關(guān)聯(lián)。貴校是我的不二選擇。

I want to study Art History in proximity to some of the nation’s top museums, but at the same time, I want small, intimate Studio Art classes.

我想在緊鄰國(guó)內(nèi)一些最著名的美術(shù)館的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)美術(shù)史，同時(shí)我也想在小型的工作藝術(shù)室里上課。因此貴校能滿足我兩方面的需求。

During my two-day stay， I found myself actively engaged in a series of eye-opening discussions with students in the cafeteria. After sitting in on a philosophy class with Brown and after listening to a lecture on political theory by Professor Johnson, I crave the opportunity to continue learning in such a stimulating environment.

在我參觀校園的兩天內(nèi)，我和貴校的同學(xué)們?cè)诓蛷d時(shí)熱烈討論了一系列令我大開(kāi)眼界的問(wèn)題。 同時(shí)我也旁聽(tīng)了布朗教授的一堂哲學(xué)課和約翰遜教授的一堂政治理論課，所有這些經(jīng)歷都使我更加渴望在不久的將來(lái)加入這樣一個(gè)令人興奮的學(xué)術(shù)環(huán)境。

Sample Bad Reasons
以下是一些糟糕的理由

You have a good reputation and the university is very prestigious.

貴校聲名顯赫。

l like the campus; it's pretty and located just where I want to live.

貴校校園美麗并且地理位置正是我想居住的地方。

I fit in well with the other kids at your college.

在貴校我感到和其他學(xué)生很合群。

Two of my best friends attend your college, and we are hoping to get an apartment together.

我有兩個(gè)最好的朋友在你們學(xué)校，如果我去了我們?nèi)齻€(gè)希望住在一起。

Your school has lots of school spirit, and I enjoy spectator sports.

貴校有很好的集體校風(fēng)，而且我很喜歡大型觀賞性的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。

I love your junior year abroad options. I want to visit other countries.

我喜歡你們學(xué)校大三年級(jí)的海外學(xué)習(xí)項(xiàng)目，因?yàn)槲蚁胗斡[其它國(guó)家。

Your business program has an excellent reputation, and even though I've never done business so far, my parents say I'd be very good at business.

貴校的商科名聲在外。雖然我從來(lái)沒(méi)有過(guò)商業(yè)方面的任何經(jīng)驗(yàn)，但我父母說(shuō)我從商一定會(huì)成功。（譯者按：中國(guó)申請(qǐng)商科的學(xué)生最多，而這樣類(lèi)似的答案屢見(jiàn)不鮮，甚有更為過(guò)者---雖然我喜愛(ài)音樂(lè)，但我父母說(shuō)這不能作為專(zhuān)業(yè)，因?yàn)閷?lái)不好找工作也賺不到錢(qián)。切記避免這樣寫(xiě)）

The kids who come here are very smart, and I think it would be good for me to surround myself with smart people. That would bring my level up.

貴校的學(xué)生都非常聰明，所以我覺(jué)得如果我和聰明的學(xué)生在一起，自己也會(huì)提高。

Your school is located in Boston, which has good architecture and a lot of other college students. So I think it would be fun.

貴校地處波士頓，那里的建筑非常美，而且有很多其它大學(xué)的學(xué)生，所以我想到那里一定很有意思。

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