留學簡歷虛構(gòu)一些可以么你好!
你的問題不太好回答可以還是不可以。如果你能不僅能虛構(gòu)出經(jīng)歷,還能提供你的虛構(gòu)佐證材料?;卮鹗强梢缘模駝t,還不如老老實實。譬如,你虛構(gòu)自己參加了一個敬老院的自愿者活動。那么,最好能做到:
1.敬老院可以提供相應(yīng)的證明材料。
2.如果學校打電話到敬老院隨意問到某個人的時候,他們能夠配合你,回答的天衣無縫。

適當美化是可以的,但事情一定要是真的,美化可以從你個人對事情的思考來下手,因為你做什么事不重要,重要的是你是怎么看待你做的事情的,所以這不是簡單的事件組合和堆砌,思想才是你簡歷的精髓。所以這里的美化說的是你做簡歷的角度和深度,而絕非造假。
可以找資深的文案老師協(xié)助你完成這部分工作,相信你在這期間也能對自我有一個全新的認識。

您未具體說明辦理的是哪國的留學簽證,其次建議不要偽造在職證明。國外非??粗貍€人信用,如果造假一經(jīng)發(fā)現(xiàn),會被立即遣返回國,留下記錄并在一定期限內(nèi)不允許申請該國的任何類別簽證。

根據(jù)美領(lǐng)館對F1簽證材料的要求,父母的工作證明并非必要文件,只是提供給簽證官了解父母有正式的收入來源而不會動用擔保金。所以合理的向簽證官解釋擔保金的情況即可。
如果父母有自己的公司,提供營業(yè)執(zhí)照、資金流水等材料;如果是租房等其他形式,可以提供租房合同等等。以此來解釋父母的收入來源。
PS超級重要,怎么說呢,就像那種逆轉(zhuǎn)牌一樣,雖然不一定中靶,但萬一發(fā)揮效果了就比SAT分數(shù)管用的多。一些學生雖然SAT考得不高,但是文書寫得感人就被錄了,還有些學生雖然分數(shù)很高,但內(nèi)心空洞,被大學連拒的都有。
GPA,那也很重要……但是相比上面的兩個可操作性較大。我的意思是說……如果你和學校的關(guān)系好的話可以改。我見過好多人改,氣死了~~~!不過嘛,如果該了被發(fā)現(xiàn)的后果會很嚴重……
2.都可以,體現(xiàn)個人精神和閃光點最重要,形式內(nèi)容無所謂
3.可以的話就偽吧,和自己的專業(yè)要相關(guān),當然最好還是做個兩天了解一下,以免露馬腳,發(fā)現(xiàn)就死慘了(我在教別人什么呀……)
4.用處其實……不大,除非你是患了什么重度昏迷或是腦震蕩把學的都忘了
5.大兩歲沒關(guān)系,我見過20歲考SAT上本科的。如果你是大二的話,建議你考GRE再轉(zhuǎn),比SAT難些,你可以咨詢下新東方的人
6.你認為的eccentric未必在別人眼里就eccentric,或是eccentric和unique還是有區(qū)別的。畢竟僅通過一紙文書或一次面試(有的學校還不安排面試)無法真實的全面的了解一個人。不要說你很特別,而要通過PS把自己的特別表現(xiàn)出來
7.抱歉不大清楚,但是我知道的有醫(yī)學和金融。好像讀到博士他們就會給你主動發(fā)綠卡了
8.抱歉這個不大清楚,每個學校不同吧。
但一般私立學校學費3萬$一年,公立會便宜1萬$左右,文理學院則要貴約1萬$左右。但是文理學院的本科教育公認是普遍頂尖的,不過在美國人眼里也算是貴族學校了。加上生活費的話,一年可能還要3000$。
9.會有,但是要知道,真正起作用的不是scholarship(獎學金)而是fundaid(助學金),fundaid的數(shù)量相比scholarship都是十幾倍幾十倍的關(guān)系。而fundaid很多私立學校都會根據(jù)家庭情況主動給你,申請的時候最好不要提獎學金,因為同樣條件的學生學校會優(yōu)先錄取不要獎學金的(這個你該想得通)
10.SATII你學理科的話相當容易,我準備了3天考了2400(好孩子請勿模仿)。保險的話主要把專業(yè)詞匯背下,做些真題(網(wǎng)上有賣)。一般復(fù)習兩周左右就能有2300以上了吧
文書的話你可以找專業(yè)的中介機構(gòu),他們比較專業(yè)會把全部流程跟你講清楚,幫你做材料,一般價格在(6~15萬)比如可以到新東方咨詢下,還有北京啄木鳥之類的。
大一這一年蓋不蓋掉要具體分析,因為說不定某些在大學這一年的經(jīng)歷很寶貴,很能體現(xiàn)你的個人精神品質(zhì)也說不定。具體你跟中介說明吧~
祝你申請順利啊~~
(手酸酸酸……)在出國留學文書中如何描述工作經(jīng)歷留學個人陳述PS是Personal
Statement的簡稱,是我們申請美國研究生院的重要材料之一。一份完美的PS有可能使你申請成功的機會大大增加,同時PS也是很好的認識你自己的過程。通過寫PS,你將更了解你自己,清楚自己想要什么樣的生活,理清自己為什么要去美國,以后將要成為什么樣的人。
這對申請者來說至關(guān)重要,對admission
officer來說,PS是你唯一有機會向他們展示一個鮮活的你的材料。成績單是死的,GRE和TOEFL分數(shù)是死的,而他們要找的是一個活生生的人,是一個有血有肉有思想的人,他們在眾多的申請者中尋找最適合他們的那一位,你如何認識你自己?你的motivation來自哪里?你將來如何打算?這些東西都可以幫助他們走進你,了解你,認識你,然后決定是不是接受你。
U of Washington的admission officer指出,他們會把申請者分成四等:"Admit with guaranteed
funding, Admit with potential funding, Tabled (a sort of admissions purgatory),
and Reject." It is in the case of "Tabled" and "Admit with potential funding"
applications, the admissions officer reports, that the personal statement can
make a real difference: "If there is a good match between the applicant's
research interests and the particular strengths of the school, this can bump
them up a level or two in the hierarchy of admission."
如何寫留學個人陳述?從PS教程中,我將總結(jié)出寫PS的各項注意點,一步步教你怎么寫PS,希望對大家有所幫助。
Preparation
PS的精髓在于將自己的motivation和Objective充分展現(xiàn)出來,它應(yīng)該是personaland analytical,
任何generalization都需要避免,PS的關(guān)鍵在于用specific, personal
details來展現(xiàn)你的個人魅力和強烈的motivation。
寫PS時,要盡量完全的真誠。這是訴說一個你自己的故事,你不是在設(shè)法創(chuàng)造一個理想的申請者,而是just be
yourself。任何的偽造都是很容易被識破的,只有完全敞開的真誠,才能真正打動admission
officer,也才能真正的認識你自己,才能真正讓你選擇最適合你的graduate program。
用specific details來展現(xiàn)你的motivation很重要。這些specific
details可以包括研究和工作經(jīng)歷、課程、你跟你所感興趣的領(lǐng)域的人的交流、你讀的書、你參加的學術(shù)報告會,以及任何可以展現(xiàn)你為何選擇并適合這個研究領(lǐng)域的原因。
你需要明確你未來的方向,至少為自己未來5~10年的事業(yè)做一個規(guī)劃,而這個規(guī)劃應(yīng)該很適合你所申請的這個graduate
program,那也正是你選擇這個領(lǐng)域的原因。
描述為什么這個graduate program適合你,不要用一些空洞的贊美性的語言,一定要be specific, be
analytical。
一定不要出現(xiàn)一些粗心的錯誤,那只能證明你不夠認真對待。
避免說一些空洞無意義的套話,避免陳詞濫調(diào)。這里可以舉個例子。
修改前:In the first project Imanaged, I learned many valuable lessons about
the importance of teamwork.
修改后:In the first project Imanaged, I made an effort to incorporate all my
colleagues as equal members ofa team, soliciting their feedback and deferring to
their expertise as needed.
修改前的這句話很空洞的講team
work,沒有任何details;修改后的話就展開講了我是怎么展現(xiàn)teamwork的。在寫PS的時候一定要注意展開這些細節(jié)。最好的方法就是以自己的親身經(jīng)歷開始,讓那些展現(xiàn)你的quality和personality的東西自然流露出來,你的那些品質(zhì)不需要總結(jié)性的generalities,
人們會從你對自己經(jīng)歷的specific details的描述判斷出你有哪些quality。
不要企圖把你所有的經(jīng)歷都寫進PS里,PS追求的不是廣度,而是深度。好的PS是深入挖掘一個或兩個主題、時間或觀點的細節(jié)。
注意避免敏感話題,因為你不知道admission officer的個人偏見。
不要用冗余的長句。短句更加有力,因為他們更加direct和to the point。舉例:
修改前:"My recognitionof the fact that the project was finally over was a
deeply satisfying momentthat will forever linger in my memory."
修改后:"Completing theproject at last gave me an enduring sense of
fulfillment."
像the fact that這種詞就是完全冗余的。
Brainstorming
1. Performa self-inventory of Your Unique Experiences, Major Influences,
and Abilities.
Long and short term goals
1. 這所學校為什么吸引你
2. 你對哪個faculty的研究最感興趣?你最想跟誰一起工作?
3. 你具體想從你所申請的program中獲得什么?
4. 你的事業(yè)抱負是什么?這個graduate program對你實現(xiàn)事業(yè)理想有什么幫助?
5. 你理想的工作的是什么?未來的5~10年甚至20、30年,你想成為一個什么樣的人?
Skills and Characteristics
6. 你有哪些品質(zhì)有助于你在該領(lǐng)域獲得成功?You need to make strong connections between your
experiences and the qualities you wish to convey.
這里列舉一些admission officer認為很重要的qualities:
? Seriousness of Purpose (to pursue graduate education)
? Intellectual Ability (to handle graduate study)
? Intellectual Curiosity (about the field you wish to enter)
? Creativity (as reflected in the way your mind addresses issues in the
field of your choice)
? Open-Mindedness (to ideas, people, and circumstances different from your
own)
? Maturity (as demonstrated by being responsible and trustworthy)
? Concern for Others (either by devoting time to social service activities
such as tutoring or by being considerate and empathetic to others' feelings; the
latter is more difficult to pull off in an application essay)
? Initiative (as in the ability to start a project or take on a
responsibility on your own)
? Enthusiasm (as demonstrated by your eagerness to engage in
activities)
? Confidence (in your ability to handle difficult situations and novel
challenges)
? Being Organized (as in the ability to stay on top of multiple tasks)
? Sense of Humor (as in your ability to find humor in difficult situations;
in many ways this is an index of maturity)
? Diligence/Persistence (as demonstrated by your ability to stay with a
task until you complete it; this is particularly relevant for programs requiring
a dissertation)
? Leadership (as shown in your ability to inspire others to work together
to reach a mutual goal)
? Risk Taking (as shown in your ability to deal with uncertainty in order
to reach your goal)
? Insight (as reflected in your ability to use introspection to understand
aspects of yourself, such as your preferences and your motivations)
? Optimism (as reflected in your ability to find positive aspects in
seemingly negative situations)
? Compromise (as in your ability to be flexible in negotiating with others;
at a more abstract level this can mean the ability to reconcile ideological
opposites or dialectical pairs among others or within yourself)
? Overcoming Adversity (as demonstrated by your resourcefulness in dealing
with serious problems such as divorce, death, illness, etc.)
7. 你所擁有的skills(比如communication,leadership, analytical),注意用specific
details來展示你的這些skills
8. 你比其他申請者的優(yōu)勢在哪里?
9. 你可以貢獻給你所申請的學校哪些東西?(給你的fellow students,你的faculty,你的broader community)
10. 你認為你為什么會在這個program的申請中勝出?
11.讓admission officers對你感興趣的最compelling的原因是什么?
Background/Accomplishments: Personal
12. What's special, unique, distinctive, or impressive about you or your
life story? What details of your life (personal or family problems/history, any
genuinely notable accomplishments, people or events that have shaped you or
influenced your goals) might help the committee better understand you or help
set you apart from other applicants? 哪些人影響了你的選擇?
13. Have you had to overcome any unusual obstacles or hardships (e.g.,
economic, familial, physical) in your life? 你所必須克服的困難?
14. Have you borne significant care-giving responsibilities for family
members? For an ailing parent, a sibling, a disabled or aging relative, a child?
How has this impacted your academics? Your professional life? Your goals and
values? 你從小就需要照顧什么人嗎?囧,這點對獨生子女不利哎。。。
15. (If you live in U.S. but are not a native-born American) How did you
deal with the challenges of moving to the U.S. from your home? Did you
experience culture shock? How did you adapt? What was most difficult for you?
What aspects of your new home did you enjoy the most?
在美國如何適應(yīng)的問題,看來美國交流經(jīng)歷還在這個personal方面可以起到一些作用~
16. If work experiences have consumed significant periods of time during
your college years, what have you learned (leadership or managerial skills, for
example), and how has the work contributed to your personal growth?
Background/Accomplishments: Academic
17. When did you originally become interested in this field? What have you
since learned about it-and about yourself-that has further stimulated your
interest and reinforced your conviction that you are well suited to this field?
What insights have you gained? 你如何對這個領(lǐng)域感興趣的?
18. How have you learned about this field-through classes, readings,
seminars, work or other experiences, or conversations with people already in the
field?
19. Are there any gaps or discrepancies in your academic record that you
should explain?
20. Can you recall a specific incident that convinced you that you had
chosen the right career path?用一個具體的事例來證明你為何選擇了正確的道路
2. Consult Friends, Relatives, Colleagues, or Professors for Ideas
別人往往可以看到你性格特征中你自己沒有注意到的地方,所以向別人請教可以幫助你更好地了解自己。不妨來做一個調(diào)查問卷,向了解你的請教~
I am applying to _________ and must prepare a personal statement as a part
of that process. I want to be sure to include all relevant data about myself and
my background, so I am soliciting information from various individuals who know
me and whose judgment I value. Thank you for your help.
1. What do you think is most important for the admissions committee to know
about me?
2. What do you regard as most unusual, distinctive, unique, and/or
impressive about me (based on our association)?
3. Are you aware of any events or experiences in my background that might
be of particular interest to those considering my application to graduate
school?
4. Are there any special qualities or skills that I possess that tend to
make you think I would be successful in graduate school and in the field to
which I aspire to become a part?