隨著經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展,每個人都有購買家電和汽車的權(quán)利。然而,家電和汽車也有其利弊。本文將對這兩者的利弊進行比較。家電的利弊有很多,其中最主要的是耗電量大、維護成本高等。汽車的利弊主要是污染嚴(yán)重、耗油量大等??偟膩碚f,家電的利弊遠(yuǎn)大于汽車的利弊。因此,我們應(yīng)該根據(jù)自己的情況選擇合適的產(chǎn)品。

利弊類大作文,社會類話題

It is suggested that everyone in the world should have a car, a TV and a fridge. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

題目來源:2022年5月21日大陸雅思大作文(重復(fù)2010年4月24日大陸考題)
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題目大意
有人建議世界上每個人都應(yīng)該有用一輛汽車、一臺冰箱和電視,你認(rèn)為利弊如何?
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思路解析
這是一道利弊類大作文,討論的是每個人都擁有汽車、冰箱和電視的利弊。利弊類文章需要強調(diào)在論證上體現(xiàn)合理性,即在具體的分析中,明確能體現(xiàn)出一邊的論述的確是大于另一邊,或是利弊均等,而利弊是否有說服力并不取決于觀點的數(shù)量,而是內(nèi)容是否有說服力。題目理解上不難,下面月半鴨帶大家來看下具體觀點。
首先來看好處,有兩方面。
一是能夠極大的改善人們的生活質(zhì)量。電視機能夠豐富人們的娛樂生活;冰箱讓食材特別是肉類和水產(chǎn)儲存更久;汽車則能讓人出行更加方便,不會受到氣候或公共交通不足的影響。每個人都會希望讓自己的生活變得更好,因此讓人們能擁有這些工具是利于個人的。
二是有利于經(jīng)濟發(fā)展。家電和汽車的需求增長會促使廠家有動力進行生產(chǎn)以增加營收,過程中能夠創(chuàng)造大量就業(yè)崗位。同時,消費者和商家的交易過程中也能為政府帶來GDP和稅收,進而使得政府有更多資金能夠投入各個領(lǐng)域的建設(shè)和研究。
然后來看壞處,這里分別給出利大于弊(前者)和弊大于利(后者)兩種思路下的弊端
大量的電器和汽車,會帶來環(huán)境污染問題和能源消耗問題。這些設(shè)備想要正常運作需要消耗大量的煤炭和石油,這會加重能源負(fù)擔(dān),同時燃油汽車也會排放廢氣,進而導(dǎo)致溫室效應(yīng)對環(huán)境造成破壞。(但隨著科技進步,更多清潔能源和科技的運用使得這個問題能夠得到改善,比如太陽能發(fā)電和電動汽車。)
弊大于利的話需要扣在everyone上,如果每個人都擁有電視、冰箱和汽車,那將是一個非常巨大的數(shù)量。即使能源和廢氣排放能夠解決,但制造這些商品就需要投入巨額的原料,并且迭代過程中還會產(chǎn)生大量難以處理的廢棄垃圾。同時,每個人都擁有汽車對于城市的道路系統(tǒng)也會是個巨大考驗,特別是在大城市中,過多的私家車運行可能會遭嚴(yán)重的道路堵塞甚至癱瘓,甚至可能都沒有足夠空間用于停車。(以上海為例,目前私家車大約有350萬輛,就已經(jīng)足夠造成道路擁堵了,如果按上海人口2400萬人,每人一輛那就是目前數(shù)量的近7倍……)
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提綱
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高分范文示例
It is universally accepted that everyone needs a car, a TV, and a fridge to make life more convenient. Though using these facilities may be advantageous for the general public, I personally believe that the potential harm outweighs the advantages.
It can be justified that possessing these facilities brings several benefits to everyday life. Firstly, they help raise people’s standards of living by making life more comfortable. Compared with the past decades when recreational activities were quite limited, the advent of television enriches people’s lives through providing them with greater entertainment. Meanwhile, travelling by private vehicle makes it possible for individuals to enjoy great freedom in planning routes, timing and destinations. In addition, refrigerators help preserve food stuffs so that people who are fully occupied can have easy access to leftovers as food can maintain its natural appearance and nutritive value in the fridge. Secondly, a growing demand for these possessions stimulates production and generates more income for the companies. In the long run, such consumption would further contribute to the national economy, through which governments would be able to accumulate significant tax revenues to subsidize projects that benefit the whole population.
However, a heavy dependence on vehicles and appliances may pose a threat to both the environment and the well-being of the general public. For one thing, having too many vehicles on the roads is likely to cause traffic congestion, and this would also be a major producer of toxic emissions that aggravate environmental pollution and harm people’s health. For another, the manufacturing of automobiles, refrigerators and televisions necessitates a significant amount of resources. Therefore, if every single individual has a demand for these facilities, it would result in massive energy consumption that may be beyond what the globe could offer. Moreover, although environmental concerns may be addressed through technological advancement, energy depletion is by no means reversible.
In conclusion, the possession of cars, TVs, and fridges could bring both benefits and drawbacks, but the negative impacts seem to be more impressive.
范文作者:張喬西
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相關(guān)詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)
Standard of living 生活水平
Recreational activities 娛樂活動
Tax revenue 稅收收入
Toxic emissions 廢氣排放
Aggravate 加劇